Song lyrics - correctness
Hello. I am Chessla. I was encouraged to write some english lyrics because my friends told me I am the best english speaking person amongst them. I am not a native speaker and I need to know whether my lyrics are gramaticaly correct or not. And whether they make sense. I have only 2 lyrics. I don't know any english native speaker. So I search here for some help. Are you able to help me by checking it and writing me some strict criticism? Sincerely Chessla
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“Hey Chessla, don’t make it bad Take a sad song and make it better As long as, the words come from your heart Then you can start to make it better…” I’m passionate about music and would really enjoy helping you with your lyrics. Do you recognize the above lyrics? Do they sound familiar? I changed the words a bit to answer your question. Can you name the real song? Do you know the band? Anyway, I come from a family of musicians, so this is a topic that I would love to sink my teeth into with you! I hope to hear from you soon!
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I was in the music business for over 20 years and met some awesome songwriters . To write a songs write about your life good or bad experience . I wrote a song for my wife who lived in another country to me . It's called miles away
I have been listening to any English songs, news and shows. I am ready to help you. Don't be shy and I am ready to help you. Just leave me your message
I would be more than happy to help you Chessla Just drop me a message and we can organise something :D
Hi Chessla. I am a native speaker of English. I can help you with your lyrics. Your English is very good by the way. Let me see your lyrics and I can help you correct any grammar. Best wishes.
- rm_haseebFinal Year Computer Engineering student. Can teach in English and Urdu.
Been listening to English songs since childhood, love to give a feedback.
Hello there, No problem at all, count on me for any help you need, you can text me if you wish or book a lesson for explanations in detail. I'll do my best even telling you some links which could help your.
Hi Chessla! That sounds so fun and I’d love to help you. Music is a passion of mine and I write books, I would love to see your lyrics and help you out.
It’s good you are not shy to write and share your ideas. If you ever need any help with the language or have questions, please don’t hesitate to let me know.
Hello, I love music and have written some lyrics myself! If you would still like someone to help you out with your lyrics let me know!
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